1.Jamuga,8 years old, has just came out of an operation on Wednesday.She is the survivor of the twins (whose heads were stuck together).Her surgery was because the flow to the spine was swollen because the flow went to the spinal cord.The surgeons removed bones and muclses from her back.Her ear upwards has no bones.
I think that her head needs to be more concious as it might get seriously injured and it might cost a concussion.I think for a child her age she is suffering so much.
2.Mumbai is held hostage last night.1 Britian,Italian,Spanish and Portugese was dead.14 policemen were also dead.The anti-terrorism leader was also found dead yesterday.
I think alot of blood was shed as 120 people were dead.I think the army risked their life yesterday to save the civilians that were staying at the hotel.The people going there for a business trip,I think should call the foreign minister about it as they can get shelter.
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Dear Brand,
I am sure you can do better than this if you put in effort to read thoroughly and think carefully. Please try.
1) What do you mean by ' her head needs to be more conscious'? Do you mean she needs to be more mindful about her head and take care of herself? Besides this, what else can you write? Any ideas anyone?
2) Do try to link your opinions together and write something more indepth. Please read others' posts to improve.
Dear Brand,
Been looking forward to your opinions for some time. Do post soon.
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